Sarah redone

Hi Frank,

As discussed, Helen (cc’d) and I are peer reviewing Sarah’s submission and we’ve picked up quite a few typos. We’ll return each section individually and we assume the simplest thing to do is for you to then cut and paste the revised text to replace what’s already there. Please can you send the updated InDesign documents to me as you go through them.

Attached is updated text for the summary section. I attach the previous version for reference. Notes:

• I’ve deleted the image on the first page which doesn’t really add anything.
• There is also a bit of text above the heading on the first page that says ‘text here needs updating’ – please can you delete this.  
• I’ve added a caption for the PPM image

Regards